K.I.S.S.
Keeping It Short and Simple Week Continues
A Marriage by Laura L. Hansen The one time I truly loved you was when we were caught out in a sudden rain and you laughed and we ran down the street holding hands avoiding awnings rainwater curling into our open joyful mouths like oxygen or wind like a glut of French kisses and the rain caressed the streetlamps until they melted into liquid light and then we were at the car and its calm quiet seclusion and we slammed the doors and we never laughed like that again
This poem was easy to write but hard to title. Here are some titles that offered themselves to me:
Untitled
Never/Ever
The Story of a Marriage
Another Summer of No Rain
A Marriage of Five Years and a Day
A Marriage of Five Years and That One Day
Do you have a favorite or an alternate title idea? Leave a comment.
Truly, despite warnings in the forecast, it failed to rain again. How are we supposed to remain The Land of 10,000 Lakes if there is nothing going into our aquifer?


I like 5 years and a day
Great!!!!
…. and that one day!
thanks for sharing… and I noted that heart rock yesterday at the library, and I smiled.
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